second draft :)

Documentation.html

@@ -1772,24 +1772,26 @@ $cfg['TrustedProxies'] =
 
         This is needed for native MS Excel export, see
         <a href="#faq6_23"><abbr title="Frequently Asked Questions">FAQ</abbr>
-        6.23</a> and for workaround limitations of open_basedir for uploaded
+		6.23</a> and to work around limitations of 
+	<tt>open_basedir</tt> for uploaded
         files, see <a href="#faq1_11"><abbr title="Frequently Asked Questions">FAQ</abbr>
         1.11</a>.
         <br /><br />
 
-        If you have server configured with open_basedir, you need to create
+	If the directory where phpMyAdmin is installed is subject to an
-        temporary directory in some directory, where it can be acessed by web
+	<tt>open_basedir</tt> restriction, you need to create a
-        server. However for security reasons, best is also to have it outside
+        temporary directory in some directory accessible by the web
-        tree published by webserver. If you can not avoid having this
+        server. However for security reasons, this directory should be outside
-        directory published by webserver, place at least empty
+        the tree published by webserver. If you cannot avoid having this
-        <code>index.html</code> file there, so that directory listing is not
+        directory published by webserver, place at least an empty
+        <tt>index.html</tt> file there, so that directory listing is not
         possible.
         <br /><br />
 
-        This directory should have as strict permissions as possible as only
+        This directory should have as strict permissions as possible as the only
-        user required to access to this directory is the one who runs
+        user required to access this directory is the one who runs the
-        webserver. If you have root privileges, simple make this user owner of
+        webserver. If you have root privileges, simply make this user owner of
-        this folder and make it accessible only by him:
+        this directory and make it accessible only by it:
         <br /><br />
 
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@@ -1797,7 +1799,7 @@ chown www-data:www-data tmp
 chmod 700 tmp
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-        If you can not change owner of the directory, you can achieve similar
+        If you cannot change owner of the directory, you can achieve a similar
         setup using <abbr title="Access Control List">ACL</abbr>:
 
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